to tom

[comic geek]

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[comic geek]

thankyou :)

[camelsrule!!!]

wow really really amazing well done!!

[comic geek]

thanks but im not sure its a bit simple dont you think?

[camelsrule!!!]

no i like it and it not really simple depends what you class as simple

[comic geek]

well i had to keep it simple cos toms simple lol
its probably not the besst to post anyway becos unless u know me or hav read my shit the second stanza makes no sense but as i got no reply from him i thought i would see what people thought

[camelsrule!!!]

ohhh simple people are cool (well i fink its coz im simple) im not sure if i have read your stuff but im going to!!

[comic geek]

lol im sure your not simple !!!!
:P

[camelsrule!!!]

r u sure im blonde and simple and i think im simple coz i dont know what big words mean *looks sad*

[comic geek]

lol im blonde i know im not the cleverest of people my poetry is prooof of this

You cant be that simple you managed to post a reply

[camelsrule!!!]

hey ur poetry is really good read mine (most are in other) and then u will see rubbish work

[xu_yun_sha]

vv good one. u got the message across very clearly.thought he dint reply he must have understood wat u were tryin to say...

[cathastings]

Camelsrule, you are not simple. You are an extremely good writer.

And comic-geek, I don't know how you do it, you're a fabuloso writer. :D Well done.

[Sunny]

Comic geek, I think I've read most of those mentioned in the second stanza, right?
I think its really good, like all your work.

[comic geek]

yeh you probably have thanx alot i really appriciate all your kind comments

comic geek x x

[murhaba]

you still have his ring you tit. lol, i mean its very good

[comic geek]

thanx faizah i was suppost to sound over him grrrr
now i sound just as pathetic as him
you only sed that cos you like love him n want me 2 see him agen
hes a cock

[murhaba]

lol hey i didnt love him. didnt know him, even tho he sounded really really sweet n u wer so mean 2 him. cnt believe he didnt reply 2 it, den agen wot cud he say

[comic geek]

well his letter was v pathetic n he sounde tre desperardos lol i hate him
hes such a fool go back to france no one wants you here stop calling i am not going to start answering all of sudden grrr ok rant over
:)

[drifting]

I LOVE IT! awesome. can kind of relate

[murhaba]

pascal ur so mean

[soulwolf]

sounds good. i like the ending, i think that's hilarious

[comic geek]

hey im not mean he left for sodding france not me

[whatsername4490]

lol yea pk... why did he go 2 france? sorry i'm dead 4getful... hey fai btw

[comic geek]

erm i cant remember it was soooo long ago and anyway he took his lip ring out now its only pierced once :( see how meen he is faizah? and i didnt brake his jaw did i we all no how that happened!!!

[murhaba]

he was changin a cd ok, n its wasnt his fault he had 2 go france,oooo how do u no bout his lip becum a stalker have we?

[wrtrzblck]

That is a hella good poem. I think that rocks. I totally relate to that. Wow, one of my favorites by far.

[spotty33_8]

wow.... that was powerful. like a slap in the face kinda powerful. keep writing! i can tell that you have alot of feelings to get out.

[electroboy]

so you really didnt like that guy hey?
well i think its amazing well done im going to keep reading through your stuff