Confusion.com

[kips]

My redeeming feature,
unbeknown to my teacher
is my anger you see
I guess that's just me.
he person I am, angry as ever
angry because I'm not pretty or clever.
Angry because I want help a lot
angry because of the things that I'm not.
angry because of the things that I am
angry because I just don't give a damn.
Yet I do, I really care
and just couldn't bear
to carry on
if you aren't there
like... confusion.com!!!!!

Dunno what that was about. Just keep on commentin...

[Squishy]

Good! Like i'm thinking your poetry is depressing.....

[Bobsey]

i got confused a slight bit, but the better part of it was good. Confusion.com has a really good advert with elephants, i like elephant, but thats beside the point!
Good poem
bobs
x

[kips]

Love, I get confsued when i'm with you!! But I love eleephants too (looks sincere). :) Tank noo! And yeh, Depressing is my middle name. And you woinder why we're all falling like toy soldiers!!

[camelsrule!!!]

we r not falling like toy soldier and elephants are cool!!! v.v.v.good!