pain.

[deadpunkgirl]

Can you see the pain I feel?
Does it show to the world?
I feel as though my heart has
been ripped out,
then thrown aside.

Can you see the pain inside?
It eminates through my entire being.
I don't know what to feel anymore.

Can you feel my pain?
Can you see the one that caused it?
I feel as though I must be cursed.

Must everything go wrong,
just when it is starting to go right?!

I don't want to feel this pain!
Though, there's not much I can do.
It seems to radiate through my entire body,
so much I can't even think.

The pain is flowing out my eyes,
the tears burn with every drop.
I just want the pain inside to stop!

The thing that hurts the most,
it that this isn't something I can heal.
Time they say, will make things better,
Well, I'm tired of waiting!!!

I want someone to love me,
for me, just as I am.
Is that too much to ask?

I just don't know what to do,
I want it to go away.
Have you ever felt this pain?
The pain I feel inside?


uh...this is what I felt when I tried to commit suicide.I still feel it now sometimes. Any thoughts or comments?

[deadpunkgirl]

ok, thanks for the tip. I'll just pretend to be happy shall I?

[camelsrule!!!]

well this is a good poem and i can relate to bout wanting someone to love you and well done really good

[Vera Bell]

Hey hunni.. Im here for you.. good song/poem!

[deadpunkgirl]

cheers guys! =)

[kips]

Erm, I usually write about my little life and my little emotions, I guess thats mostly why i write... but erm... not everyone can captivate the exact emotions they feel and dont you often write about your feelings Rach ma huni?

[deadpunkgirl]

Ok. fair enough, the advice is taken and stored. =)

I wonder what a person who suffers from mutiply personality disorder would write about????????

It could be interesting...........

[~Megan~]

that would be weird.....but yes interesting

[deadpunkgirl]

I loved to met someone with a MPD or whater they are called.....

To Emo Death - I'm sure your hamster kicked ass and is rocking out in hamster heaven =)

[deadpunkgirl]

If I had a pet I might write something about it but I never have had one so I cant.....

[deadpunkgirl]

awww......do you like my new avater? cute?....

[deadpunkgirl]

I dont think so.....its just sleeping I think...I think.....

[deadpunkgirl]

ewww!...

Oh, Its...is it?....yes...no..yes...Yes....YES- ITS ALIVE! (just taking a quick nap) phew.... night night baby seal X

[ItsAlwaysOneOfThoseDays]

hey well most dont kare what i have to say and im seen as a freak in my school soo even tho im a guy i no how u feel

[rubber monocle]

shut up pottery

[pottery4life]

your not dead, your not a punk and your probably a man.

[pottery4life]

my names not pottery, monacle boy (see how do u like it), its pottery4life get it right

[rubber monocle]

ha! I knew you were gonna post here fucker and I don't give a shit about you calling me monacle boy or whatever, just shut up and leave

[pottery4life]

oooooo sketchayyyyy someones getting a tad eggy

[rubber monocle]

shut up moron

[pottery4life]

someones a bit emotional, is it ur time of the month?

[pottery4life]

goodo! i like people being happy

[pottery4life]

except you monocle boy

[rubber monocle]

Listen dude, if you wanna fuck around then be my guest, I'm just curious, what makes people so sad and deprived that they go around just bashing other people's fun, for fun?

[kips]

second time you've mentioned that hun!

[kips]

now... what is this guy pottypoo all about?

[pottery4life]

pottypoo? poo, in a pot? who do you think i am?

one has standards, of that you must be sure.

[kips]

Um yeah whatever... anyway, whats wih you, why are ou being so horrible?

[pottery4life]

i feel so alone.

[kips]

other thread.... eh, cant memba which one.

[~Megan~]

i like some kitties

[Scary101]

This is depressing, but it's good writing!

[evilxbunny]

i really like it... i feel the same way alot of the time... i think that's why most of my stuff is depressing... i am clinically depressed you know? love it really...